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Was this useing a vipzone midi cause i really want that melody i want to do a remix i love the sound of it so much.
Check out my music and pm about the melody cause it would mean alot if i could so a remix of this.
10/5
Author's Response:
sounds good to me.
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You guys seems real promising together id really keep at this eh its sound real pro all ready.
The vocals are really beautiful on this track Kylies got a very beautiful voice and good mastering skills.
The bass was strong and dark goes prefect with this type of track the synths were nice to got a great lead melody with the song to all you really needed was some pads to go with your choir even the horror bass went well with the track and thats abit of an old school over used synth these days put you guys pulled it off really well.
The only thing i didnt like about this track was the lead that came in at 2:05 it was to electro sounding for me for this kind of track but it doesnt matter you still got a 5 and 10 from.
Anyways i think it would be a great idea to make a Shifty Audio account for here cause then i can keep up with this stuff and so can other cause alo0t of people are gonna like and id love to support you guys all the ways.
Keep up the great work its sounding great.
Peace
Author's Response:
Coool!
Thanks for the review, as for the sequencing, I'll keep the tips in mind, and perhaps even consider re-mixing this sometime.
(sorry about before (don't hit me))
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I really didnt like this track and there is alot of reasons why.
1:i didnt really like how you got into the song so fast i mean you should of took your time had a nice little build up to it.
2:The melody was nice but you pretty used the same one through the whole track it got kinda boring and that goes with reason number 1 cause you start of with the main melody and ended with the main melody.
3:All the synths and bass were to to lud and it drowned out all you percussion which is a bad thing but percussion and the clearness of it is very important in tracks.
4:there wasnt much percussion anyways all i can hear is a kick and a snare,the kick should be changed or fix cause its abit to unhearble and got drowned out by your bass and you can really feel the kick and you need to feel.the snare was fine lol.
Thats about all i can find what needs fixing about this track and in my honest opion i dont think this track should be on the audio homepage cause ive been trying hard to get hard on there myself,and IM SORRY if thats mean and hurts your feeling but when it comes to reviewing for me i try to be as honest as i can and its nothing against you im only trying to help you out man.
Check out some of my music and leave a review if you want,cause i dont want you to think i hate you i just dont like this track.
Keep the work up you do have talent.
Peace
Author's Response:
guess what...buy a new set of boxes and you might hear it as good as other people do. you got a serious hearing problem? can't hear the minor changes in the melody? anywasy thx for nothing, your tips are wrong because you didn't hear it right...
bout the melody... I've heared a few of your stuff and I must say that YOUR stuff are SO variated that I can't think of a way to describe it -.-
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This is pretty amazing man.
Im kinda of a critic when it comes to reviewing on audio portal but theres only one thing i found that i didnt like about this track and thats the piano (which i think thats what you used) that came in at 2:42,it kinda took away away the darkness of the track but i reckon with alot more verb on it and turned down abit i guess it could sound tight with it but for me i didnt like it.
Everything else was great the intro gets you hooked straight away and the ending just makes you want more.
Great work.
Keep it up.
Peace.
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Theres a few things that need work
But first i really like the melody in this it very catchy and very ravish,iv all ways had a thing for ravish melodys so you got the melody down good and good synths to go with.
Its just the only thing that really like me down is repeating the melody through out the whole track and the percussion,the kick didnt really go well with it,it needs to be about harder to be honest and you dont need to you use the crash so much cause it puts me under the impression that your taking the track some where different where it didnt go.
Good work anyways keep it up you'll get better at fl i mean its kinda of a complex program but i learnt everything my self on my own on fl and check out where my music is.
So just stick at it and one day you will find you self making something you never thought possibl.
Peace
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This is pretty awesome man the sound of it reminded me of one of my favourite bands "Before The Dawn"
I didnt fully realize that this was a requiem for a dream remix cause it wasnt the full name but only requiem but i thought it would pretty much be a remix of that since everyone knows this song and remixs it but its mostly trance not metal and i never thought about a metal remixs of it but you really pulled it off alot and i really think if you work hard a finsh it it could be a really big hit on here and id support it all the way.
So i would be fucking awesome if you could pm if you do finsh it cuase this is sounding really good.
Keep up the great work
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It has a more break beat style.
Cuase it really doesnt have a main melody or anything
But dont get me wrong it sounds great and all man so good work 8 and a 4 from me
Keep up the work
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the synth were WAY to loud drowned out all the percussion in the track man i mean even with the bass boost on the kick i could hardly here it.
The melody didnt sound bad at all its just synth=to loud.
Author's Response:
I was going for more of a melo track with this...
most of my music has quite alot of bass...
I aimed for more of a calming windy flute style..
I thought I got what I wanted with this
but thanks for the review man.. appreciate it :D
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I liked the melody alot and the synths you used with it went real well together.
The intro was nice to but just a tad to long.
The kick seemed abit weak aswell maybe if you turned the pitch up on it would sound better and just some more persscusion and it would be a pretty perfect track
Check out my music some time
Peace.
Author's Response:
fair enough
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I dont really listen to hip hop.
But just make the kick and bass louder and this track would be real tight man.
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