Score: 7

"Can you smell..."

submission: Oxygen (Trance Mix)

date: August 26, 2008

...What sytrus is cooking?

Haha nah its good for a first track you should be happy with what you got,its alot better than the first peice i made.And since its you first there no point telling you what you can do better.

Good work anyways.

Score: 9

"Pretty Sweet"

submission: CATS - CaB (Koriigahn Remix)

date: August 22, 2008

Didnt really think much of this song when it first started because you went straight into the main melody which you dont see to often and when you do its hard to keep a person hooked to the whole song after that,which you did with me tho.

The melody sounded great very ctac`hy which i love in a song.Really like the bass you use to it was hard and catchy aswell,HYOu used nice back up synths aswell.Overall all together it kinda sounds like a very mofern 8-bit track to me,if you know what i mean.

Nah really to say that i think this track could use apart from the fact that you didnt use any normal trance percussion hi-hats which is still fine that you didnt cause it gave the track more originality which i guess is what most people are looking for thses days.

Thats about it.
Got a Five and a 9 from me.
Great work.

Score: 7

"Hope my 5 helped"

submission: Crowz! - Bass Up

date: August 17, 2008

Cause i got you back up to 2:07 but still this needs a high score.

Its good i just think it could you some volume on vocals and maybe synth.
Intro was nice like the percussion you use it had me hooked 0:41 then i just kinda of felt abit empty to me needs more synth and maybe some pads if you have some nice ones.But you did alright with what you used.Its just the zero bombers make you looks like shit.

Score: 10

"Man...."

submission: [Zell] X-files remix

date: August 13, 2008

That was just the shit

Thas all i can say

Oh and maybe make a full version??

Score: 10

"Oh Fuck Yeah"

submission: [Glass-Redux] Preview

date: August 1, 2008

Intense thats all i can say, Theres nothing wrong with the trac k and everything right with it.

Can wait for thee full redux version sounds l like is gonna shit fucking hard.

Keep up the great work, Check some my stuff out if you get the time.

Laters/

Score: 9

"Haha sweet"

submission: [TMM43] Breathe

date: July 16, 2008

Did samlee let you remix this song or did you find it somewhere else?

Cause im remixing it to and i thought it was his original mix?

Its sounding good btw the man i bet it wont sound as good as mine when im done :D

Keep up the good work.

Score: 8

"This is why..."

submission: The Covenant

date: July 16, 2008

...Newgrounds need to make a Gabba section on audio portal.

Now im not really into gabba my self i really find it to be fucking weird to be honest be i do like a few gabba tracks and this one aint half bad at all.

Keep up the work and if you want check out some of my shit its not gabba tho mainly trance and a few alternative bits.

Score: 10

"Impressive."

submission: xKore - View

date: July 16, 2008

Now i have a question since this is your only song out so far,Im saying its a no but is this your first track??

Now this is an excellent track youve got here very trance very deep im probably not the first person to say it but you sound very alike to Pulstate and if i am the first to say that well then you should check hi out he uploads on here.
I really liked 2:06 to 3:17.But a thing i would change from 3:17 to 3:30 is instead of playing them same one part or the main melody and play different parts of the melody till 3:30 but not random parts,you know what im trying to say?Oh and also loved the piano bit you made and i really like how you reversed some of the notes in the pian o melody ive allways wanted to learn how to do that.
The intro was great and so was the rest.

Congrats on top 5 aswell u deserved it with this track keep up the great work im gonna stay tuned to your stuff and it would be cool if you could take some time to maybe check out my stuff.
Cheers for the great track laters.

Score: 10

"WOW!!!"

submission: -={UNR]=- Ayuquarika

date: July 8, 2008

This track is really not what i expected from someone i havnt heard before you but you have fucking impressed me very much man.
Love the intro but i reckon you could of done it better with out haveing going straight into the vocal instead of startsing with hit-hats the synths your used then filter in the bass and put the vocals in at the same time.Liked how you alos just got straight into it at 0:28.
Love 1:10 alot i mean seriously theres nothing i find better in trance than japanese vocals and that main trance synth just it could of been abit louder for more power to the track.The pads went well with the track to.
BUt in all seriousnes there is not one thing i would want you to change about the track its amazing and i can tell it would of taken alot of work for any ng artist.

A few more things:Did you get inspiration for this from "Ayu-Naturally (Wippenbury Remix)" cause it also has japanese vocals and the same main lead synth in it.
And whats the bass sample you used cause its the one bass i want and need but dont have and cant find [pm me about it].
Cheers for such a great track,Keep up the work.
Peace

Score: 9

"Its good but..."

submission: What Phfor?

date: July 6, 2008

You know it not your best i mean its sounding great like allways.
But its just seems to simple for you and to be honest im kinda of lost for words on this track and its not realya good lost for words i mean i know the track is better than anything else on this site and anything ive made but yet i find it to be quite you know not as good as i would expect it to be and it sounds to much like toher tracks of yours which is kinda of a bad thing cause i like an artist with diversity and use's alot of different synths in there track [which i cant talk about because theres one synth i use in most of my tracks].SO really what im trying to say is this sounds alot like some of your other tracks which kinda let me down on this track cause i dont want to see an artist as great as yourself have albums with which are just the same great synths strings pad and bass but just different melodys,Get what i mean?

So anyways it is a great track dont get us wrong but just maybe a abit of change in the sound of you tracks would hurt and maybe a really good thing from some of your close listeners like me.

Cheers. keep up the work
Peace.